the sounds playing all at once in the poem page is a cool idea
continue trying to add the original metaphor of monster to me to monster
spaced well
the nose/mouth box is a different blue (make it a PNG and get rid of the background)
the writing was significant, weave more into it
break up the poetry into sections on different pages
put text more throughout the project to make it more cohesive and thought out
the positioning is different on the main page versus all the others
ask for help from peers
give stuff space to breath from each other
maybe put buttons on the side to make it like a game controller
consider adding audio pf my voice reading the poetry
- samruff
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